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I# W8 o! o& ]听《爸爸的梦想》有感, 为原版远方译写/ R( F$ V8 M: Y1 W
《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!
, F% R: v( ^5 i6 G* g, u "Father's Dream"
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作词:原版远方 作曲:谭锦明
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当人去街宁,打开邮箱,久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲,来自远方,不亦乐乎,此君好文,原版笔墨,力透荧屏,未曾晤面,共鸣无限,神交网路,其乐融融。迫不及待,点击便听,链接奉上:' x$ i& j4 J; ?9 c
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一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者,不为上乘。而此曲,乐起悠扬,初起清新童稚,转而深沉励志,继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀,写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬,山高水长,听来复去,已韵入胸膛。
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是否,就它,叠一纸鹤,放飞而去,捎给远方。5 ` n \1 S! K. }' f
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于洋男声版:
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小卵石女声版:
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Author: 远方
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Orchestration: Yu Yang3 Q! r, l0 ?0 N. U$ }
Singer Male : Yu Yang: G0 |+ L! f0 U0 o/ B k# C4 C
Singer Female: Xiao Ruan-shi
6 S0 D) [; w" j% Q/ i* c9 x( E% e% ~ 《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!
! u3 I3 r& ~$ |" `* v' k8 O 小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗7 a3 t9 M# J8 [
望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想
2 D0 D+ f5 S! l" ]( v为求学 远走他乡 独自来到西湖旁% Y; p' H2 I2 S" |; N
那是传说中的人间天堂
) x' ~+ C4 V) d1 _ ]The first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little,
. f( h8 s$ U7 B5 Chills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old. # ~/ P$ `& F: [# R* D
a student, by the Lake of West, lonesome moonlight at waterfront, laid.) f0 |2 C1 E" \, e
a legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei4 H& E! c; ?+ E: p
4 h& }$ i+ _5 z4 a0 V6 F0 @小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡
" Y4 ?8 B, p6 W6 L重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望
* L/ L6 Z8 T& f2 K0 D" R7 Z好男儿 志在四方 北京纽约去远航
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Many times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes,
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Good boy, go, across the oecean and see the world,
# h% c& d0 b+ d7 wBeijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe, $ H* e! Q# |: s: s* k; `
trips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road. " `: G6 j; {% Y) q' n/ |
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十年寒窗 有了梦就有了力量
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终于走在纽约的大街上' p2 t5 y; b6 U/ ^5 ^/ m, j
这就是传说中的世界之窗 O* g$ ?. ~; \
Winter snows cold, Morning sunshine falls
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my dreams milks my will, as rocks in the wall, : p3 x* `( S% t) z( R$ y
firm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows ( x! Q, I- X2 Q( P
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飞过蓝天,飞过海洋外面的世界靠自己闯: s) K/ r' @/ Y1 V' f
记不住阴晴,记不住圆缺却记得爸爸鬓角的白发* w& s1 F* w1 q7 E. r6 q/ P
Eagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea., c% t$ l, j1 U/ B
Sunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see,
?: G6 H, Y {+ _( N% t! oSummers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips, . s$ Z3 L' r% [
Moon moves slow in dark clouds, falling leaves, black hair in whites.
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' C F; Y& |9 \4 H$ ?4 [% J& v山不再高,路不再长
, N( t @0 t* c% o一串串脚印伸向远方
7 J6 N+ x' g q1 [3 `% ~$ g忘记了悲欢,忘记了离合3 G5 \0 B( M& S8 ~6 S
却忘不了爸爸儿时的梦想
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footprints on trips, mark all maps, a home of hopes down the hills,
: H5 O( E1 S, f# _ {- J/ uHappy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old,
2 }0 Y, G( y! mDaddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told,
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